ForumTitleContentMemberSexCountryDate/Time
IR-1 / CR-1 Spouse Visa Process & ProceduresI-130 approved!!!
CONGRATS :thumbs:
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-08-01 09:52:00
IR-1 / CR-1 Spouse Visa Process & ProceduresCalifornia transferees. Please use this thread!!!!!
Congrats to all approvees, and to all other waiting- the time will be short.
The approvals will be here soon.
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-08-01 09:59:00
IR-1 / CR-1 Spouse Visa Process & ProceduresNVC Response Time
QUOTE (bsuboyus @ Oct 31 2007, 05:13 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Can any one please tell me how long do the NVC people take to reply back an email.

Thanks


A while, I wrote them on Monday and I got an automated response Tuesday but I am still waiting for their email response ...... whistling.gif whistling.gif whistling.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-31 19:27:00
IR-1 / CR-1 Spouse Visa Process & ProceduresIs there no other option?
I am so sorry to hear this , but you really should seek legal assistance in your situation.

Wish you luck in your future.
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-11-09 16:28:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & Procedureslast question for a while a hope

Ok i thank everyone on this board for all there help. Ok signing the check now for 170 bucks writing the check out to Department of Homeland Security (correct?) i live in florida and mailing my package to the following address

USCIS TSC
PO BOX 850965
Mesquit, TX
75185-0965 (Correct?)

I have a cover letter which i got from this site.
I-129f signed by me and completed by me
G325a from me and fiance signed by both of us all 4 pages
I attched passport photes to each of our g325
Copies of my birth certificate
Copies of my Divore Decree
Letter of intent from both of us
Photos of both of us to show proof of relationship
Letter on how we met and stuff like that (1 page)
Copies of her and mine passport showing we been in the same countries at the same time she if from colombia and we where living together in Indonesia for almost 1 year so i think that is kind of proof we have been together.
Looking for engagement ring receipt now.

And thats it i checked all my forms at least 10 times so i think thats it.

Before i send it off if i left anything out please let me know

Thanks
JOe

I am fairly positive that those are the forms required, I am going for K3 so ti is a little different, just wanted to say good luck on your journey. :thumbs: :thumbs:
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-04-10 09:49:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresI-129f question

Hello, everyone. What does my fiance need to send along with I-129f?

Thanks for your help.


Hi, I too am in the process of getting the I129F together, what I have gotten together so far are :
1. a check in the amount of $170
2. the I129f form filled out
3. G325A- 4 sheets & one passport type photo for me
4. G325A- 4 sheets & one passport type photo for spouse
5. copy of my passport and a copy of my citizenship passport
6. a copyof our marriage certificate
7. a few pictutures from our marriage ceremony ( it was at City Hall in NYC)
8. Copy of NAO1-pending arrival
If I missed anything someone will come along to adjust, also check the guidlines to verify.

Good luck on your journey :thumbs: .
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-04-08 23:45:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresBank Letter - Switched Banks?

Just wanting to get some input from the valuable opinions of VJ members!

I was previously banking at Bank of America. I held checking and savings accounts with them. However, upon my new position living/working in Vietnam, I've since closed the accounts at Bank of America and opened a new checking account (in January 2006) with an internet based banking institution.

My question is: in requesting the bank letter for the I-134 Affidavit of Support, should I request a letter from Bank of America (the old bank) and the new bank, or only from the new bank that I currently have deposits with?

The new and current checking account was opened in January 2006, just after I closed the Bank of America accounts.

Anyone else have this type of situation?

STL_HCMC


Hi, I am sorry I can't answer your question but seeingthat I am not at the stage I am trying not to worry about it. But, with the knowledge on this forum I am sure someone will be along shortly to give you a good response. Good luck on your journey.
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-04-24 09:41:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresPolice Clearance Certificate

At what stage is the police clearance certificate for the non US Citizen needed during the K1 visa process?

Thank you


yeah the interview stage. good luck
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-05-08 13:51:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & Proceduresgot AON1! but fee not be charged

My notice date on NOA1 is 1st, May. they charged 20$ as penalty due to not correct fees on 3rd, May. Untill now, they not try to charge our fee again we have put enough money in on 4th, May. and not any FRE. We called 1-800.., they give another #, then called, it is automatic, no one answer, my bf left message. If anyone know any email address of CSC, then we can write them to cash our fee. For my understand, if they not cash your fee, they won't do anything on your case, right? I'd rather they send me a FRE or send all application back, then we will know what we do next. But now, no any news, case is not in right order, so strange. I hope you guys can give me some ideas.

Thanks a lot!

Alice


I had a similar experience with Vermont bu ####### was on the bank that I used. I waited about a month and the finally sent me the invoice for the correct amount plus an additional $30. Yes it is true that nothing gets done to you case while it ibeing waited on for payment. Don't worry pretty soon you will get some sort of response from your service center.

I don't know if they will treat it like how they did mine but I too was looking for a RFE but I did not get that or a return onmy petition -that was a good thing.
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-05-12 23:39:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresNOA 1 for meeeee
I was so happy when I got both NAO1s I actually jumped and screamed out YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I was so happy when I got both NAO1s I actually jumped and screamed out YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH 1 step for USCIS one giant leap for Marsha :lol:
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-06-01 21:48:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresVermont

That's really great news.

We sent in a Money Order so we have no idea what's going on until my fiance receives the NOA1 in the mail. Here's hoping that's soon!



Welcome to the VJ board, and good luck on your journey.



J&K.......just a thought I too sent in money order and I found out the exact date that it was cahs by calling the 800 # on teh reciept and punching in the money order number @ the top. You might wanna try that
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-06-08 22:00:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresUSCIS NEW PROCESSING DATES!
Good the processing dates have moved :dance: :dance: :dance: , about flippin' time.

I can't seem to log on either :whistle: :whistle:
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-06-13 21:11:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresMore Ambiguity, The New I-129F, WHAT About the Mandatory Beneficiary Disclosures?

I was under theimpression after reading the draft new form, that typical dating services like yahoo and match and lavalife were NOT considered marriage brokers. Did I dream that up?



I am finding this quite confusing, I too think I have been dreaming up things when I met Paul (my husband ) we were chatting in a popular forum for Jamaicans--Marriage broker? God I hope not. :crying:
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-06-13 21:43:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresUSCIS SENDING RFEs IMMEDIATLEY !!!!
:dance: :dance: :dance: great news :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

I too am waiting on my NOA2 from Vermont but I am only has of April-doesn;t seem that long until you start feeling the absence of the only man you love.

Edited by desperatewife, 13 June 2006 - 09:26 PM.

phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-06-13 21:24:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresI could identify with this while waiting thru the K1 process
I laughed and cried, you are a very captivating writer. at least you are in stage 7 I am somewhere between stage 3 and 4. :flower:

I laughed and cried, you are a very captivating writer. at least you are in stage 7 I am somewhere between stage 3 and 4. (F)


phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-06-16 17:01:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresI-129F New Vesion
GREAT NEWS :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: , wonder how long before the RFE
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-06-15 12:03:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresCSC APPROVED!!!

Just received the email!!!!!!

Application Type: I129F, PETITION FOR FIANCE(E)

Current Status:


This case has been approved. On July 24, 2006, an approval notice was mailed. If 30 days have passed and you have not received this notice, you may wish to verify or update your address. To update your address, please speak to an Immigration Information Officer during business hours.

:dance:

CONGRATS TO YOU :dance: :dance:
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-07-25 10:18:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresApproval from CSC for me yahoo

Hi all,
Just checked the USCIS web site and saw i was touched again today...when i clicked for the update this is what i saw....
Application Type: I129F, PETITION FOR FIANCE(E)

Current Status:

This case has been approved. On July 24, 2006, an approval notice was mailed. If 30 days have passed and you have not received this notice, you may wish to verify or update your address. To update your address, please speak to an Immigration Information Officer during business hours.

OMG there is hope for all of as as the CSC is approving the petitions .They recieved my IMBRA RFE on July 7th and I got my approval today July 25th...and it just so happens that i am leaving today to go visit my baby in the Philippine today also..wow THANK YOU GOD FOR THIS BLESSING.
So all the rest of you it is just a matter of a few more weeks i would think since they recieved my petition on 5-30-06 and it transfered to the CSC on June 7th..wow i cant believe it..so hang in there guys I know yours will be comming soon,
Keith & Irish Forever


CONGRATS :thumbs: :dance: , CSC is moving along just great
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-07-25 12:44:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresAnother CSC approval!

I could not believe when I came for lunch that there was email from USCIS so I opened it to find an approval! Yes, we are so excited! We absolutely did not expect this so soon and wish everyone else as speedy of an approval!

*** DO NOT RESPOND TO THIS E-MAIL ***

The following is the latest information on your case status

Receipt Number:

Application Type: I129F , PETITION FOR FIANCE(E)

Current Status:

This case has been approved. On July 24, 2006, an approval notice was mailed.
If 30 days have passed and you have not received this notice, you may wish to
verify or update your address. To update your address, please speak to an
Immigration Information Officer during business hours.

If you have questions or concerns about your application or the case status
results listed above, or if you have not received a decision or advice from
USCIS within the projected processing time frame*, please contact the National
Customer Service Center.

National Customer Service Center (800) 375-5283.

*The projected processing time frame can be found on the receipt notice that you
received from the USCIS.
*** Please do not respond to this e-mail message.


Sincerely,


The U.S. Citizenship and Immigration Services (USCIS)


Congrats :thumbs:
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-07-26 14:27:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresAPPROVED!

:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:
*** DO NOT RESPOND TO THIS E-MAIL ***

The following is the latest information on your case status

Receipt Number: WACXXXXXXXXXX

Application Type: I129F , PETITION FOR FIANCE(E)

Current Status:

This case has been approved. On July 25, 2006, an approval notice was mailed. If 30 days have passed and you have not received this notice, you may wish to verify or update your address. To update your address, please speak to an Immigration Information Officer during business hours.

If you have questions or concerns about your application or the case status results listed above, or if you have not received a decision or advice from USCIS within the projected processing time frame*, please contact the National Customer Service Center.

National Customer Service Center (800) 375-5283.

*The projected processing time frame can be found on the receipt notice that you received from the USCIS.
*** Please do not respond to this e-mail message.


Sincerely,


The U.S. Citizenship and Immigration Services (USCIS)

NOA 1 --March 6
RFE Reply--July 6
NOA 2 July 25

They are rolling out!
Hope everyone else gets theirs soon!
:thumbs: :star: Hang on in there! :star: :thumbs:


CONGRATS!!!!!!! :thumbs:
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-07-26 11:12:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresRFE Reply Question

I'm sure someone else has found this out as well, but when you call USCIS and check your case status, the recorded message reads that exact statement, and then tells you the time is 90-120 days.

I think something is wrong with they're automated email updates (besides the obvious) where for some reason it doesn't include the dates as in the phone recording.

Good old USCIS

Sorry, just noticed your a VSC petitioner, so the dates on the phone recording may be shorter than 90-120, 90-120 is for the CSC


If I am sure VSC is 60-90 days or 30-90 days.
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-07-27 12:30:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresI've lost hope

Hi Everyone,

I have officially lost all hope. I really, really, really, REEEAAALLLY, thought that I would be getting my NOA2 sometime this week. Tomorrow is Friday and I haven't received a thing. I've contacted both senators (filled out the authorization form when sending letter the first time) and haven't heard anything from them. I contacted my rep. in congress and haven't heard from her either. I've contacted UCSIC to get the same "call back in 30 days" bull.

I've seen people with NOA1s of April and May, but yet I who have an NOA1 of March 10 get nothing. I know, I know, I should get this depressed, but every night when I speak with my fianceé it just seems like she is farther and farther away. Our relationship has grown as have we and yet it seems we are prisoners to this process and our relationship cannot progress.

I am seriously on the verge of just simply giving up. Lord knows what I will do if I am denied. Most likely I will just give up. At one point or another we must admit that we are doing ourselves more harm than good by staying in this sort of relationship. Obviously every bone in my body tells me that breaking up is just simply not an option, but I don't know how long that can last. 2 years, 3 years, 4???

Maybe I will cheer up once the processing times change, but even then it will only mean that I have to wait until the processing date reaches 30 days after I got my NOA1. :crying: :(


I understan what you are feeling, I know you do not want to here : don't worry, things will get better or any of those but do cheer up. I have been without my husbnad for over 4 months ( I know there are others who have been apart longer), when we had gotten married 2 days later he left to go back home, 3 months later I saw him for 2 weeks. I know it is very fustrating seeing all these people who just got in line jump ahead of you but you will get through.
I do not know you guys but I don't think you would be denied, for what reason?Because you have been sentenced away from your fiancee due to a stupid lenghty process from the USCIS. Or is it because the USCIS skipped your petition to approve the ones after yours?.
Hon..........cheer up and think about the light at the end of the tunnel. You will be with your fiancee, start a new life with her.................a few months down the line you guys will be laughing about how stupid you feel at this moment.
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-07-27 18:49:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresJust Venting

Going by your timeline and all that touching going on, you are on someones desk IMO. Crystal ball prediction......an approval this coming week.

Damm I hope so or my credibility is shot :P

Seriously though, I hope you hear something soon (F)



I so understand what you are saying, I have been waiting fo rover 60 days fo rmy I129F to get approve, it is getting so hard to go on without the hubby ( we break up well I break it off with him every other day thne I rember that we are already married. The only difference between us is my case is at Missouri (sp??) and you have yours at the service center.
Be patient though, the approval will come soon :thumbs: .
Aussie can you make a prediction for me too please.

Edited by desperatewife, 08 August 2006 - 08:42 PM.

phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-08-08 20:41:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresSecond k-1 petition

On August 2nd :
Please I need your help one more time,
I entered here on k-1 visa 9th june 2006,spent just 2 weeeks with my U.s fiance,but we were not
living together as she wanted it so I cooperated,that is not enough,she kept finding faults and
make my stay hre in the U.S frusting and always saying at any little misunderstanding that she won't marry
meany more.
I and her pastor has tried to make this marriage work but she still insisted not to marry me.
This lady has made things so hard for me since the past 5o days plus i have spent here in U.S.
To summarrize all in short. yesteday,she sAid her decision is she can't marry me.
I have been sponsoring myself since I came here till now and she doesn't care
and I don't have any more money to spend and she has decided not to marry me.
And my return tickets has expired on the 5th July 2006.
Based on the Affidafit of support she sign to take care of me till I start working.
I am frusted right,No money to take care of myself,No return ticket back home.

Please what legal action can I take to sustain myself here and to get ticket fare back home before the
90 days expires.I am really hurting emotionally.
I have left all, my good payed job,home (apartment), all for the U.S and
My usc fiance want to frustrute me.
Can I legally make any sort of claims for losing all for for her intentionally frusting me.
resigning from my work and emotional turture.

On July 8:
Any way I want to thank you all for your prayers and suggestions,they really worked for me.
We have resolved our issue yesteday,praise God.
For some folks who doubt my intent,I love my usc fiance and we are marrying for real.

On July 4th:

Hey Vj's members,how is every thing with you guys.
Please i need you guys to help me with sugesstion on what to do now.
I came in the U.S on k1 in june and my staying here will expire on 7th sept 2006.
I am having a little misunderstanding with my Usc fiance and she is threating not to marry me
beuse of some personal isuues.

I want to ask you guys in this forum on what to do if she Refuse to marry me within the 90 days
of entry.What step can I take to legally resove my stay in the U.S.
And what does the law says about this issue.


Based on his posting going on backto July this Op has knownthat his fiance will not be marrying him. If you guys take a look at the Sub Africa forums you will see where he has been trying to get advice to stay in this country. I am strongly against that . Valentine IMO a second fiance visa will cause a redflag, especially one filed so soon after a failed engagement.
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-08-15 15:56:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresI’m cursed

Sent my RFE to CSC last Tuesday, Priority mail 2 to 3 day delivery, with delivery conformation and
it still hasn't arrived there. I called the post service and was informed that the 2 to 3 days delivery was
not guaranteed, and could take up to 14 days. So the Priority Mail which cost $4.05, is the same as First class mail, which cost .39. Seriously if I knew that it would have take this long I would have spent the
14.00 and over nighted it.


so sorry to hear, the pacakage will get there. I have always had problems with USPS. What I was returning my RFEs what I did was sent it regular first class mail -the first one apparently have not gogtten there so the second one was sent regular mail but certified. That way I got a delivery confirmation on it , just my .01.
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2006-08-21 09:37:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresOut of the Blue.....
I am sorry this had to have happen to you Andrew, but I am glad that you two love birds will have the opportunity to work it out.

I think a lot of action ( hint hint ) is in store for you two.
I hope things work out for the best.
Wishing you much luck.
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-03-08 12:20:00
K-1 Fiance(e) Visa Process & ProceduresPolice Certificate Help!!!- Jamaica
Hi,
Go over to the Yaardie thread, there are people who recently went through this part of the process who can give you the most recent prices...etc.
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-07-26 20:30:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaI've created a monster!!!!!
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Jan 29 2008, 07:08 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Toya spots Mya and Tradee getting out of the car. Fitz remains in the car, staring straight ahead. He is covered in blood, and his face is streaked with tears. Toya picks up the hem of her wedding gown and begins running toward him, screaming. Tradee stops Toya, and holds her still.

Tradee: Toya, I need you to calm down. Fitz is not hurt. I have to tell you something very serious. Where is Fitz’s family?

Mya: T…calm down please. Fitz is okay. I promise. Baby, I’m so sorry.

Toya: Mommie…Daddy. Grandmummie! Come quick. Let me go Rasta. Fitz needs me.

Toya and Fitz’s parents and family run outside from the commotion.

Tradee: Fitz is okay. It’s Frowzy. Frowzy didn’t make it. He-he…Fr-Frowzy got shot. Im nuh mek ie!

Grandmummie: Dear Father GAWD! NO! No Father. Jesus Savior pilot mi!

Fitz and Frowzy’s mom: NOOOOOOOOO…nuh mi baby! Nuh mi baby! Where is my baby? Dear GAWD..whe mi pickney?

Toya’s mom runs to comfort Fitz’s mom, and Toya’s dad and Tradee run to catch Frowzy’s grandmother. Mya holds on to Toya.

Toya: Let me go Mya. I have to see Fitz. He needs me. He needs me. He needs me. Oh God, what happened My?

Mya: Fitz is not ready right now honey. He hasn’t said two words since…since…since it happened. He wouldn’t talk to the police, he wouldn’t talk to the ambulance staff. He has just been sitting in the same position. Let me help you change clothes honey. Then, we can go over and help Fitz. There is a lot of blood.

Toya: NO! I don’t give a damn about this dress! I need to get to my husband! LET ME GO!!! Fitz, I’m coming baby. Please let me go Mya. I don’t want to hurt you.

Mya releases Toya, and Toya runs to the car. Mya walks behind her, being careful not to interfere. Toya yanks open the car door, and she grabs Fitz’s hand.

Toya: Fitz honey. It’s me…Toya. I’m here. I’m here baby. I love you so much Fitz. Ba-baby can you talk to me? Come on, it’s okay. I love you. Oh baby…please talk to me.

Fitz: To-To-Toya. He killed him. He saved me and Rasta and Mya. Toya. I need my wife. I need Toya. Mummie…whe mi mummie? Doan tell Grandmummie. Ssshh. Granmummie tek wan rass cutlass tuh im headtop. Betta har nuh fe knoa.

Toya: I know honey. I know. Baby, do you think you can get out of the car now? Come on Fitz baby. Let me help you.

Fitz: I love you Toya. I miss my brother so much. Why did he leave me? Why did he leave? Toya, I never got the chance to tell him that I loved him. He saved my life. He saved all of our lives. Frowzy was a warrior baby. Toya, I need you. Damn baby, I need you to hold me. Just make it go away. Make it go away.

Toya: Okay baby. I love you too. I know you loved him. He loved you too. Frowzy knew you loved him Fitz. He knew it. Remember that. Hush baby. Come on, let’s get you out of the car. I’m going to hold on to you for eternity baby. I’m here. I’m here now.

Somebody help me get him out of the car! Rasta! Daddy!

Tradee: Mi got im sar. Please stay wid de oomen dem.

Tradee runs over to the car, and helps Fitz stand. Fitz blinks for the first time, seeing Toya in her white gown. She wipes at the tears flowing down her cheeks.


My heart breaks for Fitz and his family....... luv.gif ( wait Marsha remeber itis just a storyy)
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2008-01-30 11:16:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaI've created a monster!!!!!
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Jan 29 2008, 07:08 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Toya spots Mya and Tradee getting out of the car. Fitz remains in the car, staring straight ahead. He is covered in blood, and his face is streaked with tears. Toya picks up the hem of her wedding gown and begins running toward him, screaming. Tradee stops Toya, and holds her still.

Tradee: Toya, I need you to calm down. Fitz is not hurt. I have to tell you something very serious. Where is Fitz’s family?

Mya: T…calm down please. Fitz is okay. I promise. Baby, I’m so sorry.

Toya: Mommie…Daddy. Grandmummie! Come quick. Let me go Rasta. Fitz needs me.

Toya and Fitz’s parents and family run outside from the commotion.

Tradee: Fitz is okay. It’s Frowzy. Frowzy didn’t make it. He-he…Fr-Frowzy got shot. Im nuh mek ie!

Grandmummie: Dear Father GAWD! NO! No Father. Jesus Savior pilot mi!

Fitz and Frowzy’s mom: NOOOOOOOOO…nuh mi baby! Nuh mi baby! Where is my baby? Dear GAWD..whe mi pickney?

Toya’s mom runs to comfort Fitz’s mom, and Toya’s dad and Tradee run to catch Frowzy’s grandmother. Mya holds on to Toya.

Toya: Let me go Mya. I have to see Fitz. He needs me. He needs me. He needs me. Oh God, what happened My?

Mya: Fitz is not ready right now honey. He hasn’t said two words since…since…since it happened. He wouldn’t talk to the police, he wouldn’t talk to the ambulance staff. He has just been sitting in the same position. Let me help you change clothes honey. Then, we can go over and help Fitz. There is a lot of blood.

Toya: NO! I don’t give a damn about this dress! I need to get to my husband! LET ME GO!!! Fitz, I’m coming baby. Please let me go Mya. I don’t want to hurt you.

Mya releases Toya, and Toya runs to the car. Mya walks behind her, being careful not to interfere. Toya yanks open the car door, and she grabs Fitz’s hand.

Toya: Fitz honey. It’s me…Toya. I’m here. I’m here baby. I love you so much Fitz. Ba-baby can you talk to me? Come on, it’s okay. I love you. Oh baby…please talk to me.

Fitz: To-To-Toya. He killed him. He saved me and Rasta and Mya. Toya. I need my wife. I need Toya. Mummie…whe mi mummie? Doan tell Grandmummie. Ssshh. Granmummie tek wan rass cutlass tuh im headtop. Betta har nuh fe knoa.

Toya: I know honey. I know. Baby, do you think you can get out of the car now? Come on Fitz baby. Let me help you.

Fitz: I love you Toya. I miss my brother so much. Why did he leave me? Why did he leave? Toya, I never got the chance to tell him that I loved him. He saved my life. He saved all of our lives. Frowzy was a warrior baby. Toya, I need you. Damn baby, I need you to hold me. Just make it go away. Make it go away.

Toya: Okay baby. I love you too. I know you loved him. He loved you too. Frowzy knew you loved him Fitz. He knew it. Remember that. Hush baby. Come on, let’s get you out of the car. I’m going to hold on to you for eternity baby. I’m here. I’m here now.

Somebody help me get him out of the car! Rasta! Daddy!

Tradee: Mi got im sar. Please stay wid de oomen dem.

Tradee runs over to the car, and helps Fitz stand. Fitz blinks for the first time, seeing Toya in her white gown. She wipes at the tears flowing down her cheeks.


My heart breaks for Fitz and his family....... luv.gif ( wait Marsha remeber itis just a storyy)
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2008-01-30 11:15:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaI've created a monster!!!!!
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Jan 29 2008, 04:52 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Mya: TRAVIS!!! BABY NO!! NO!!!! PLEASE TRAVIS! You are going to kill him. Baby think about me and our baby. Please Travis, he isn’t worth it. Come on Travis baby. Please don’t. Let the police put him behind bars. Don’t give up your life for his. Your brother needs help.

Tradee falls to the ground sobbing. He is breathing hard from the physical exertion that would permanently disfigure his twin. Mya kneels beside him, and cradles his head in her small arms. Tradee holds on to Mya as if his life force depends on it, and thunderous sobs rack his body. In what seems like eternity, but was in reality only 10 minutes, the police and ambulance arrive.



OOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, I can feel every little emotion they going through.

srry
Morning ladies
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2008-01-30 10:57:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaI've created a monster!!!!!
Thanks kimmy, with the help of the most high and my new found family I know I will get through it..... yes.gif ;yes:
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2008-01-29 16:39:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaI've created a monster!!!!!
HOW YOU HOLDING UP TODAY JAWI?????????
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2008-01-29 15:13:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaI've created a monster!!!!!
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Jan 29 2008, 12:44 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Frowzy: Yo bredrin! Whaa gwaan? Beg yuh a smalls man. I man nuh nyam frum mawnin.

Delmar: Whaa gwaan mi yout? Mi dere yere bredrin. Times hard inna de ghetto mi yout. Whaa yuh wan fe nyam?

Frowzy: Respect mi yout…mi nyam fish ar fowl. Nuh pork pass mi mout lips!

Delmar: Dread! Wan steam fish bredrin! Walk good mi yout. Likkle more.

Delmar begins walking toward the restroom with his and Mya’s food. He looks up, and notices that the key is on the ground and the stall is still padlocked. Delmar looks around and spots Fitz and Tradee walking toward him. His first reaction was to run, but he remembers the gun. Delmar drops the food, and grabs the gun. Before he can aim the gun at his target, Frowzy rushes him from behind. The gun goes off into the air. BANG! The crowd begins screaming and running.

Frowzy and Delmar tussle on the ground, both trying to take possession of the gun. The gun goes off again, BANG! and blood pours on the concrete. Delmar drops the gun, stunned because he has never wounded another person, less known taken a life. Mya screams, and covers her mouth in horror at the scene unfolding outside the safety of the car.


On noooooooooo, him can't kill Frowzyyyyyyyyyy..........like yeye wata drop from mi eyes, I am really into this.........
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2008-01-29 13:54:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaI've created a monster!!!!!
what a twist.......... yes.gif yes.gif yes.gif yes.gif kicking.gif kicking.gif kicking.gif
Mya girl use you head....play the game fi real.I only hoope he really allows her to call Toya
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2008-01-29 12:15:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaI've created a monster!!!!!
I finish , I catch up, mi deh pon di same page has unnu.........

A wah wrong wid Delmar...........Mya nuh want you........sick head man guh kidnap har.....

Too much smoking will do dat to you.........laughing.gif laughing.gif Mad , sick, head nuh good..............you bredda gwan muder you when him catch you..........Tink the wedding build up was good........wait .unnu just wait....Fitz ( a him seh dis , mi not even memba) bu tMya can hadle har self.....

Jawi tanks........you come back with a vengance good.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2008-01-28 21:35:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaI've created a monster!!!!!
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Jan 28 2008, 04:45 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE (Marie87 @ Jan 28 2008, 04:23 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Jawi you're such a FANTASTIC writer!

This is getting sooo good!!! eb0dfafc.gif


Tonks! I was going to do the predictable all haades break loose at the wedding...but it just wasn't flowing for me...so I had to switch it up a little. I really wanted Fitz and Toya to get married. I love them so much.

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God is so good! I finally got my Final Trial Notice from the judge. With God's grace, I should be getting divorced on February 19, 2008. It will be three days after my 6th wedding anniversary. Woo-hoo! Finally a ray of sunshine to hold on to! ClockWatch2.gif kicking.gif dancin5hr.gif dancin5hr.gif

GOD IS GREAT.........this is beautiful , I am so happy for you .
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2008-01-28 21:28:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaI've created a monster!!!!!
mi never realize to rahtid, A DELMAR grab har..........what a twist to he!!

Jawi you is a true diva.....only god he knowsssss.......

mi a go read and shut up


QUOTE (jawi876 @ Jan 28 2008, 04:40 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Ian: Mel…damn baby. I-I n-n-need you Gem. Pretend to love me for just a little while…please Mel. I need to hold you. I need to hear you say you love me. I need you to call me Daddy. Melodee, I need to feel my d**k tearing up your walls. Right now. Right here. Just love me Gem.
Melodee: Ian baby, that will just complicate…ah sh** what the he**? I love you Ian. Mi wan yuh fe mek mi pums swell Daddy. Mek love tuh mi Daddy.

Ian shoves Melodee harshly onto the truck. He grinds himself against her, as he roughly gnawls at her neck. He allows his hands to grab handsful of her soft flesh in an attempt to sooth his raw emotion. Ian opens both doors on the passenger side of the Navigator. He lifts the hem to Melodee’s elegant dress, as she presses her face on the inside of the front passenger window. Melodee groans as Ian’s fingers brutally ravage her core. Ian pushes her silky thong out of the way, and he enters her with a load roar. Melodee arches her back to meet his thrusts. She turns abruptly to face him because their current position only allows Ian to make shallow thrusts. Ian grabs both of her legs, and wraps them around his waist. His long fingers greedily knead her fleshy a** and thighs as he buries himself inside her warmth, over and over again. Melodee places her hands on top of the truck and the passenger door to steady herself. Ian bites the dark skin right above the low neckline of the emerald dress. His passion is marked clearly by the purplish black bruise his suckling left on her breast. Ian’s sperm eagerly swim toward Melodee’s ripe and fertile egg. Whatever the future holds for them, Melodee and Ian will be forever bound by the new baby developing in her womb.

The two lovers are oblivious to the crowd gathering around them. A few older people voice their displeasure at the obscene display of affection. Some of the younger people cheer and mock Ian and Melodee’s coupling. When Melodee and Ian release, they slowly separate. Ian kisses Melodee hungrily, and declares his love for her. He makes a futile attempt to cover Melodee as she rearranges her dress. Melodee decides the best way to save face is to go rude gyal all the way.

Melodee: Eeeehhnnn? Ah whaa? Oonu neva see ooman phock har man? Bumbocl**…oonu brite eh?

Melodee places a finger inside herself, then she gives it to Ian to suckle insatiably. Melodee then lifts her dress briefly and pats her a** rapidly to make it jiggle at the crowd before she walks gracefully to the driver’s side and jumps in. Melodee brings the Navigator to life, and she streaks out of the makeshift parking lot, spewing gravel and marl dust in their wake.


NASTY WHO$#ING GYAL.......

QUOTE (jawi876 @ Jan 28 2008, 04:40 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Ian: Mel…damn baby. I-I n-n-need you Gem. Pretend to love me for just a little while…please Mel. I need to hold you. I need to hear you say you love me. I need you to call me Daddy. Melodee, I need to feel my d**k tearing up your walls. Right now. Right here. Just love me Gem.
Melodee: Ian baby, that will just complicate…ah sh** what the he**? I love you Ian. Mi wan yuh fe mek mi pums swell Daddy. Mek love tuh mi Daddy.

Ian shoves Melodee harshly onto the truck. He grinds himself against her, as he roughly gnawls at her neck. He allows his hands to grab handsful of her soft flesh in an attempt to sooth his raw emotion. Ian opens both doors on the passenger side of the Navigator. He lifts the hem to Melodee’s elegant dress, as she presses her face on the inside of the front passenger window. Melodee groans as Ian’s fingers brutally ravage her core. Ian pushes her silky thong out of the way, and he enters her with a load roar. Melodee arches her back to meet his thrusts. She turns abruptly to face him because their current position only allows Ian to make shallow thrusts. Ian grabs both of her legs, and wraps them around his waist. His long fingers greedily knead her fleshy a** and thighs as he buries himself inside her warmth, over and over again. Melodee places her hands on top of the truck and the passenger door to steady herself. Ian bites the dark skin right above the low neckline of the emerald dress. His passion is marked clearly by the purplish black bruise his suckling left on her breast. Ian’s sperm eagerly swim toward Melodee’s ripe and fertile egg. Whatever the future holds for them, Melodee and Ian will be forever bound by the new baby developing in her womb.

The two lovers are oblivious to the crowd gathering around them. A few older people voice their displeasure at the obscene display of affection. Some of the younger people cheer and mock Ian and Melodee’s coupling. When Melodee and Ian release, they slowly separate. Ian kisses Melodee hungrily, and declares his love for her. He makes a futile attempt to cover Melodee as she rearranges her dress. Melodee decides the best way to save face is to go rude gyal all the way.

Melodee: Eeeehhnnn? Ah whaa? Oonu neva see ooman phock har man? Bumbocl**…oonu brite eh?

Melodee places a finger inside herself, then she gives it to Ian to suckle insatiably. Melodee then lifts her dress briefly and pats her a** rapidly to make it jiggle at the crowd before she walks gracefully to the driver’s side and jumps in. Melodee brings the Navigator to life, and she streaks out of the makeshift parking lot, spewing gravel and marl dust in their wake.


NASTY WHO$#ING GYAL.......
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2008-01-28 21:24:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaI've created a monster!!!!!
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Jan 28 2008, 01:10 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Tradee walks up and kisses Mya. They hug and embrace and watch the happy couple as Jah Cure seranades them again. His song choice is “Good Morning Sunshine.” The couple walk hand in hand with Fitzroy Jr in the middle back up the aisle. The wedding party slowly follows the couple back up to the abandoned church.

Tradee: Baby are you okay? You look pale and sick. Do you need something?

Mya: No…I’m feeling sick again. I think all the excitement, and going a couple of hours without eating…oooo…I’ll be right back. No, it’s okay. Can you take my purse? Go and tell Fitz and T that I’ll be right back to take pictures. I love you Travis.

Tradee: Are you sure? I can go with you, and make sure you are okay. Okay, I’ll go find something to help you clean up afterwards. I love you too Empress.

Mya walks toward the small waterfall, figuring she can clean up using some of the clean spring water. Just as she finishes emptying her stomach, she feels someone behind her.

Mya: Travis, baby. I told you I would be okay. You dote too much. A girl can get…spoiled…can get…Delmar? What are you doing? Delmar, no! Leave me…TRA…!!!!

Delmar grabs Mya, and places his hand over her mouth. When Mya struggles and tries to free herself, he uses the butt of his gun to knock her out. Delmar picks Mya up effortlessly, and carries her through thick bush and weeds…away from the wedding site.

Delmar: I'm sorry Mya baby. I had to get you away from Rasta for a little while. You are my HEarth HAngel, and now my wife. We will have so much fun consummating our wedding night.


dam-dam-da, tek him up pon di offah........mi now seh you bus har ####### already but you preggers and she and Chantel love acid.......and de likkle ediat Ian deh bout......so mek Travis go wid you..( caan seh mi nuh warn you)........
Alright mi can't helpit.....
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2008-01-28 21:18:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaI've created a monster!!!!!
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Jan 28 2008, 12:28 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Ian: WHY TOYA?? WHAT THE PHOCK IS GOING ON? DID YOU CONVENIENTLY FORGET YOU HAD A FIANCE IN AMERICA WHILE YOU PLANNED THIS BULLSH**?

YES TO RAYTID, YOU MUST BLOODCL*^T BLIND

srry mi couldn't hol dit in..Kimmy I tek it back......mi miss out nuff tings . mek mi go back reading.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2008-01-28 21:09:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaI've created a monster!!!!!
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Jan 26 2008, 08:40 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Hi everyone.

I'm sorry that I have not posted anymore of the story. I really thought that I would be able to finish the story this weekend. But, it doesn't appear to be in the works. I have been in a LOT of pain lately. I'm depressed because I can't get any relief. I'm just tired. Tired through to the bone. I just want to lie down and not get back up. I'm only holding on by a thread for my sons.

I'm dealing with a lot of negativity at work, and its hard not having any real friends in Atlanta. My man is in Canada, and all the people that really love me stay in other states.

I feel like I'm missing out on so much with you guys. I feel out of the loop and like a stranger. I don't know when I'll finish the story, I apologize. I'm just so tired of it all.

Jawi

I am very sorry to hear this, bu tI pray and hope that you will get over this and get better............Just know god NEVER gives us more than he thinks we can handle...this might be a little test so later things will be better.........I really wish Icould take your pain.......Love yu much


QUOTE (kimmykashi @ Jan 28 2008, 08:51 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
dat a go be quite didfficult fi Madame...pure badwud outta u mout !! laughing.gif


kimmmmmmmmyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy , u c cause mi know you preggers and mi nuh wan no star inna mi eye I gonna mek dis slide laughing.gif laughing.gif laughing.gif........... how you and the baby holding up?
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2008-01-28 21:02:00