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Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Nov 2 2007, 02:41 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
*Ian sulked and stalked impatiently in his foyer. He stalked from the foyer to his oversized study, occasionally staring at his watch or the window. He is getting more upset by the minute, he can’t believe these tricks would try to play him. Did they really think they were important to him? Michelle and her friend Erica were jump-offs. They didn’t have the luxury of showing late.

He vowed to punish them for every minute they were late. He envisioned his teeth sinking into flesh until he drew blood. His manhood quivered at the thought. The more deviated his thoughts became, the harder he grew. However, as soon as he allowed his mind to soften and focus on Toya, so did his girth.

Ian’s and Toya’s sex life had never been very good. He often blamed it on her lack of experience, and became heartless and crass when he frequently lost his erections. Toya literally trembled in fear, and cried for days at his brutal remarks. Ian felt awkward, clumsy and out of control. He could never tell Toya why he never lasted more than a couple of minutes, and it wasn’t because he climaxed early. He liked rough, voyeuristic sex. He got off on women wearing dog collars and chains. Poor little church girl Toya couldn’t identify with the seedier side of sex. She wanted foreplay, candles, lace and phocking rainbows.*

Story come to BUMPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP laughing.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-11-02 15:00:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
QUOTE (Yardiewife @ Nov 2 2007, 01:53 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
And all is right in the world again...well at least for now...you never know with Mya girlwerewolf2xn.gif


true dat

ClockWatch2.gif is runnig out on Ian when is he gonna show up, hope it is not the day of the wedding.

I did say that Mya and Tradee was gonna be together and she was gonna keep his baby so I think watching all them psychic show pays off laughing.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-11-02 14:04:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Nov 2 2007, 11:52 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Mya: I know. I know. It’s all confusing. Tran’s real name is Delmar. Tradee aka Rasta is Travis. Tran lied about his real name when he met me, and he asked Tradee to lie about his name as a result.

Toya: SH**! What in the world is going on? Identical twins…

Mya: Ssshhh! Let me finish. It gets better, trust me. Travis was dating this girl, Melodee, in high school. They would sneak off together after school, so no one would know that they were having sex. Well, she didn’t tell Travis that she also started sleeping with his twin brother, Delmar. Melodee found out later that she was pregnant, and in love with Delmar. She knew that Travis wouldn’t allow her to have an abortion, and he wouldn’t understand that she was sleeping with his brother.

Delmar was very popular with the girls in school, and he didn’t have a problem showing them all love. If the girls he was interested in were loyal to their friends, he would just conveniently change his name to suit the situation, like he did with me.

Well, Melodee came up with a plan to get rid of Travis for good. She needed to get him away so that she could have the abortion without anyone being the wiser. Travis knew that she was pregnant, and he wanted to marry her. Melodee in her immature wisdom, decided to set Travis up for rape. She asked her friend Chantell to seduce Travis, and then scream rape. The problem was that Delmar had already been after Chantell under the pretense that he was Travis. Chantell finally agreed to sleep with Travis, who was really Delmar, and she screamed rape afterwards.

Delmar fled the scene. The police came to their home looking for Travis, and Travis went along with them sure of his innocence. Over time, his mind began to play tricks on him, and he began to believe that he had actually violated a woman. He said the nightmares became so real, that he could literally see himself raping Chantell. His relationships with women suffered after he was released from prison. He became Rasta in order to find some peace from his inner demons.

Chantell recently came to him, and apologized for the part she played in ruining his life. She told him how Melodee planned the entire thing, and why. He wanted to share the news with you, but he said that the time was never right.

Toya: Damn My! That’s a lot to digest. So, tell me about tonight. Why were you naked and crying in the hallway?

wow this really is a lot to digest.........but in teh intrim where is Ian.I wanna hear what is gonna go downnnnnnnnnnnnn whistling.gif whistling.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-11-02 13:24:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Nov 2 2007, 12:12 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE (Yardiewife @ Nov 2 2007, 12:00 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
(((Jawi))) I am glad to see you back. I don't really know what happened but I want you to know that I will be praying for your physical pain as well as the pain in your heart. heart.gif

Please don't feel rushed or stressed to get us parts of the story. The story is meant to be fun and shouldn't be a burden for you. If you need to take time, we all understand and will be here waiting for you no matter how long the absense. rose.gif


I understand, and I appreciate all the warm thoughts and support. Actually, the story is not a burden at all. My family issue just had me discouraged. I have let go now, and I'm leaving it at the alter for God to handle. Thank you Gill and Tameka for your words of support and wisdom too.

My girl Jonesie knows me so well. She called and we listened to some tunes over the phone and laughed our butts off at Vybz Kartel and his lyrics. LORD!!!!! I needed that laugh for real.

You all are the best group of ladies. I appreciate having each of you. rose.gif rose.gif rose.gif rose.gif

When I blow up, I will remember each of you...vaguely. biggrin.gif


I don't want to seem like the even up one, but I couldn't help but say this , I am vaguely new here in this world ( well I was here back in 06 but left and now I am back) so I do not know you guys at all but I can't help but feel like I DO know you all I feel a kind of connection to you. I don't know if it is because we are all going through or went through this process at one point or if it is the connection we all seem to have with Mya and Toya but when I was reading Jawi's comment just now and I got to the end all I could say was screw you you heiffer laughing.gif( don't get me wrong I am not cursing at you) things I would say to family and friends people I am close. laughing.gif laughing.gif laughing.gif

I am rambling on let me go ............


much luv to mi yaadie peepies heart.gif heart.gif heart.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-11-02 12:46:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
QUOTE (clairern @ Nov 2 2007, 11:11 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Anyway guys, I am just chilling today as I am on call to go in to work if they need me. You all need to keep my interest piqued today please? helpsmilie.gif I am always bored and I have already bothered Mike enough for today. goofy.gif



HI Claire , srry I have not been here for you.I have bee back and forth on this floor trying to look busy so my boss wont bee too suspicious whistling.gif whistling.gif laughing.gif laughing.gif



QUOTE (jawi876 @ Nov 2 2007, 11:47 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Good morning peeps. I have been trying to recapture the parts of the story I lost the other day. Sorry if I worried you guys. I'm still in pain, and my heart hurts too, but life goes on. I really appreciate all the warm words and prayers and PMs and calls. THANK YOU and I love you all just as much!

Jawi

Here is some more of your story:

*The elevator re-opens on the fifth floor, and Fitz and Toya almost step on Mya’s listless body.*

Toya: Excuse us ma’am. Mya? Oh my God! What happened Mya? Fitz baby help me get her up! Wait, let me close her robe. Mya talk to me. What happened? Baby, we are here now. I’m so sorry. I’m sorry I wasn’t here for you.

*Fitz picks Mya up and they rush to Suite 56. The door is ajar, and Fitz stands Mya up next to Toya. He goes into the room to make sure that it is okay for them to enter.*

Fitz: There is no one here. It’s okay to come in now. *Fitz walks over to help Toya escort Mya into the room.*

Toya: Thank you so much Fitz. I love you baby. Can you go down to the front desk and see if they can tell you anything? Oh, and can you get someone to send up some tea? Don’t rush sweetie, I have a feeling we need some alone time.

Fitz: Okay baby. I’ll have the tea sent right up. Call me if you need anything, I won’t be far away. I love you too Toya. *He kisses her forehead and lips tenderly*

Toya: Mya honey, talk to me. Fitz is gone. What happened? Did Tran hurt you? Did you two argue?

Mya: *muttering through her sobs of despair* WaitTravisIloveyouIwontkillourbabyIwontkillourbabyIpromisejustletmeexplainTravis
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Toya: What? Mya please help me help you. You have to slow down and explain what happened.



Hi Jawi welcome back Ms.....hope everything has been great........ rose.gif heart.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-11-02 12:34:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
QUOTE (clairern @ Nov 1 2007, 10:16 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Most JA men finds it taboo to "go down" as they call it, but they don't mind it being done to them. Mike and I have no issues with this. We are very open and love to explore new avenues and ways to satisfy each other. innocent.gif innocent.gif yes.gif yes.gif


I must agree w you there it is true good.gif , but wah mi realize is some a dem lie nuh rahtid, whistling.gif whistling.gif whistling.gif you get them one a way and you will definantly get a different story from them........ laughing.gif biggrin.gif , but I must say hubby was no different but no he sibgs a different song hint hint devil.gif devil.gif innocent.gif laughing.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-11-02 12:29:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
Jawi you and your family are in my prayes rose.gif heart.gif

welcome Rasberryswirl

Welcome back MArlita.....hope you had a wonderful trip...... :energetic:
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-31 18:50:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Oct 31 2007, 10:38 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
*Mya jumps, she is confused and trying to get her bearings. She hears the loud sounds of two men arguing. She leaps from the bed, and is startled by her appearance. Her hair is matted and plastered to one side of her head, and she has blue and black marks all over her neck and chest. The spots are tender to her touch, and she smiles gingerly at the memory. Mya grabs her robe laying on the edge of the bed, and runs to the middle door.*

Mya: STOP IT!!!! Baby please stop! What’s going on? Why are you both yelling? *Mya grabs Tradee around the waist.* Calm down baby. Let me handle this okay?

Delmar: B-baby? BABY? Are you serious? When did he become baby Mya? I come over to tell you that I can’t bear being away from you, and now I find out that you sent me away so you could phock my own brother? Yuh DUTTY PUSS YEYE SKETTEL! Mi ago chop yuh bumbocl**!

*Tradee lunges for his brother. But, Mya moves in his path. Tradee continues to reach for Delmar, being careful of Mya.*

Mya: NO! No! You will not fight over me! I’m sorry you had to find out like this Travis, but I’m in love with your brother Delmar. I-I never expected…

Delmar: *laughs harshly* LOVE?? DUTTY MOUT SKETTEL! Yuh inna love wid a man nuh tell yuh im real name? Yuh inna love inna one day? Yuh rooks mi hoff two days ago skettel an now yuh chat phockery bout loving mi brodda? Mi name DELMAR…nuh TRAVIS!

Mya: Wha-what? What do you mean? You lied to me about something as simple as your n-name? *She looks questioningly at Tradee* I-is…is that true T-Tradee?

Tradee: Baby, calm down. Let me handle this. Please sit down.

Mya: Wh-why do I need to sit down?

Delmar: Look. I’m sorry. I’m sorry okay. Mya, please let me talk to you alone for a minute. I can explain everything. I promise.

Tradee: Mya, I asked you to trust me, and let me handle this!

Mya: Y-you all planned this from the start? Y-yo-you both ran game on me?

Delmar: Mya baby. I lied about my name only! I loved you from first glance, and I had some legal problems under my own name. So, I used my brother’s name. I never thought things would go this far. I swear!

*Mya looks from Tradee to Delmar in utter confusion. Her hand goes protectively to her lower abdomen on pure instinct. Tradee looks at her and lowers his head in what appears to be shame. Mya allows the tears to cascade down her cheeks, and Delmar takes this as an opening to continue.*


story come to bump.
YES.....
YOU A HOLD YOU GUT .you shouldda put you hand dung a you punnie laughing.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-31 12:31:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Oct 31 2007, 09:24 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Tradee: Eeehhnnn? Whaa gwaan bredin?

Delmar: Sarry Rasta. Mi try fe knock pon Mya’s door. *Reality dawns on Delmar as he looks at his brother’s naked form* Eh…Eh! Yuh mek de Empress Toya tink twice bout marry de cabbie eh? Wooooiiiieeee! Gwaan tru Ras! Bullet! Bullet!

Tradee: *kiss teet* Mi yout…whaa yuh check Mya fe?

Delmar: Ah whaa?

*Tradee steps aside and walks back into the interior of the room. He casually slips on his jeans. Then, he grabs paper to roll a spliff, and looks at his brother. He walks over and closes the interior door that separates Mya from them.*

Tradee: Mi nuh repeat myself agen dred. WHAA yuh check Mya fe? Yuh business wid I and I Queen dun ovastand?

Delmar: Whaa de bloodcl** yuh chat bout star? Yuh knoa Mya rate mi mi yout! Yuh stare pon mi like wan eediat…but yuh tek de stalker ting tuh far tuh rass!

Tradee: Shotta mi neva wan war wid yuh ovastand? Mi neva step tuh yuh bout Melodee…mi gwaan same wey all til now. But, yuh business wid mi Empress DUN!!! Mya tell mi sey har tell yuh straight and dun har nuh rate yuh from mi bawn. Mya tell yuh fe tek wey yuhself. So mi ask agen, whaa yuh check Mya fe?

Delmar: Rasta yuh and mi his a big man bawn and grow. Mi nuh war wid yuh zeen? Mi nuh knoa why yuh deal inna phockery but mi look fe Mya straight? Mi ago gwaan easy and ting. Tell Mya mi soon come fe check har lata.

Tradee: Nuh RAMP WID MI DELMAR!!!! MOVE AN COME HOUT!


OMG this is really good... good.gif good.gif good.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-31 12:26:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Oct 31 2007, 08:36 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
*Tradee wakes to a loud knocking on the door. He and Mya are entangled on the floor. He stands and walks over to the clock on the night table, 8:48 PM. He glances at Mya’s sleeping form on the floor, and walks back over to her. He lifts her effortlessly, and places a kiss on her forehead. She only stirs a little, and hugs his neck tighter. The knocking continues. Tradee is getting irritable, and may not be so nice to the person on the other side of the door. He places Mya on the bed, and shields her nude body with the plush comforter.

Tradee strolls over to the door like the king of the castle. He is aware that he is still nude, but the rude person at the door deserves to see whatever they see. Tradee opens the door and peers out.*


and who is it????????????????????? whistling.gif whistling.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-31 12:23:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Oct 30 2007, 03:56 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Meanwhile, back in the States, Ian is reviewing his bills. He and Toya have a few credit cards together, and he is interested to see what types of things she is burning money on in Jamaica. He pulls up the pending transactions log for their Black American Express, and nearly falls from his chair. Why in the he** did she just spend $8000 on a wedding dress, another $1300 on shoes and accessories? He knows that she is not trying to force his hand at marrying her. He proposed to her to get her off his back, and that was as far as he ever intended to take it. He would just tell her that she would have to return everything. Better yet, he would let her keep it and model it for him. Then, he would give every piece of it to charity to watch the smile disappear from her eyes. Ian reviews a couple more of their joint cards, and was satisfied that she had not made any more major purchases. He lost his sight and all his body organs shut down when he got to the recent activity on their platinum visa card. Toya had recently put deposits down on floral arrangements, limo service and table rentals. Toya was planning a wedding, and he obviously wasn’t invited.

He had to figure out a way to get her away from Mya. Mya was a horrible influence, and had Toya believing in herself again. She was undoing all of his hard work, and Ian couldn’t fathom losing Toya. Ian’s father always told him that he had to keep a woman in place at all times because they were all closet whores, and would cheat if given the opportunity. Mya was a perfect example of the woman his father told him to stay away from. Toya was a prized possession, and worth the extra energy to train her up in the way of a good wholesome woman.

Ian had actually been very attracted to Toya when they first met. Her gorgeous smile and voluptuous curves appealed to him from the first day. He talked about her incessantly at the dinner table, until one day his father asked to meet her. Ian brought Toya by for dinner, and his father began ridiculing him and mocking him daily. He told Ian that no woman that attractive would ever want a ghetto, sewer monster like himself. Ian set out to prove his father wrong. But, the damage was already done, and he hated Toya before she even had a chance to love him.

Ian immediately calls his travel agent to make arrangements for the first flight to Jamaica. After several transfers, and a lot of threats, he was booked for the first available flight arriving on Friday morning. Ian shuts down his computer, and decides to relieve some tension. He always kept a few women on the side that he could call upon when the need became urgent. Michelle told him that she would be right over, and she would bring her friend. He hoped the women were up for a rough night, because there would be nothing resembling lovemaking going on from his end.*

I missed a day and all of this is going on,
now Ian is going to Jamaica.... devil.gif whistling.gif what is going on.I want Fitz to catch him and beat the sweet honey ice tea out of him laughing.gif

RIP to your cousin Kimmy heart.gif rose.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-31 12:04:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
Jawi I see the meds are starting to ware off whistling.gif good.gif wink.gif
Mya girl you really need to cool it off a bitttttttttt that baby is gonna have d@*! marks on its head laughing.gif srry I couldn't help it........

Edited by phatmadame81, 30 October 2007 - 11:21 AM.

phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-30 11:20:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
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QUOTE (jawi876 @ Oct 29 2007, 02:45 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Jr: Mi nuh wan har! Mi wan fe mi hown modda! Har gwaan like wan duppy, shake and fret! Why mi neva meet har til now Daddy? Mi neva bring wan gyal pickney home and tell yuh sey har ah yuh new daughta. *Begins to bawl out for Me-Ma loudly*


you all leave teh child alone, he is only 4 years old, it is very sadddddddddddddddddddd
crying.gif crying.gif
but him bright nuh backfoot........you can teel the pickney dem wah live wid dem granny laughing.gif :lo: laughing.gif laughing.gif


Di pickney need fi know him place my girl! Chat bout what him waan - *kissteet* laughing.gif mek granny gi him wan bax laughing.gif an tell him fi siddung


Likkle pickney Fitz chatting like a big man blink.gif



cause him daddy probably told him wha to seh whistling.gif


laughing.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-30 09:19:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Oct 29 2007, 02:45 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Jr: Mi nuh wan har! Mi wan fe mi hown modda! Har gwaan like wan duppy, shake and fret! Why mi neva meet har til now Daddy? Mi neva bring wan gyal pickney home and tell yuh sey har ah yuh new daughta. *Begins to bawl out for Me-Ma loudly*


you all leave teh child alone, he is only 4 years old, it is very sadddddddddddddddddddd
crying.gif crying.gif
but him bright nuh backfoot........you can teel the pickney dem wah live wid dem granny laughing.gif :lo: laughing.gif laughing.gif

Edited by phatmadame81, 29 October 2007 - 03:29 PM.

phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-29 15:25:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Oct 29 2007, 02:27 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Tradee: What’s wrong Mya? What did I do? Did I do something wrong? Talk to me! Am I hurting you? What’s wrong?

Mya: I’m infected. Oh God! I’m infected! How could you do this to me? I can’t have your baby. My career is ruined! Help me! Why God? Why? I’m infected. I’m infected. I’m infected. No man will ever love me again! How could you infect me?

Tradee: What? Whaa mi do? Mi neva hinfect yuh mi gyal! Whaa de bloodcl**? Yuh mad tuh rhaatid? Calm dung! Mi nuh breed yuh star. Bumbocl**!! Mya please. Mi neva try fe hurt yuh. Mi ongly did whaa yuh wan mi fe do. Please stop screaming.

Mya: No…no…I can’t. I can’t. Nooooooooooooo!!!! Help me!



laughing.gif laughing.gif laughing.gif laughing.gif serves you righttttttttttttttttttt
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-29 15:15:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
Mya go sid dung wid you hoering self Toya nevah sleep wid Tradee......you are such a #######........You a go breeeddddddddddddddddddddddddd laughing.gif laughing.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-29 14:22:00
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QUOTE
QUOTE (Yardiewife @ Oct 29 2007, 01:06 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Oct 29 2007, 11:02 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Tradee: Fire! Fire! Ma’am, there is a fire on this floor. Please hurry to the stairwell. We need to have you evacuate the premises. Now!


Things just took a kinky turn laughing.gif yes.gif laughing.gif


what is gonna happen ......are they gonna rooks in the hallway?????????

QUOTE
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Oct 29 2007, 11:04 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Gosh! I'm still heavily medicated and trying to recover. Dang! *kiss teet*


Take all the time you need to recover yes.gif don't worry about us...we can entertain ourselves if need be.

Not trying to throww dirt pon you but yes.gif gotta agree...... if you gotta take some more time to recover you just gotta do you.

Edited by phatmadame81, 29 October 2007 - 01:11 PM.

phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-29 13:10:00
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QUOTE (Sonshyne @ Oct 29 2007, 12:39 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE (phatmadame81 @ Oct 29 2007, 10:34 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
[tradee is gonna go to the room pretending to be him.this is gonna get hot....
Iam going on lunch break. devil.gif


laughing.gif laughing.gif We both are thinking and posting the samething yes.gif


GREAT MINDS THING ALIKE......... yes.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-29 13:03:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Oct 29 2007, 12:26 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Front desk staff: Excuse me Mr. Sims. Sir, your wife has been expecting you back all day. She asked us to give you this message, and said that you would understand it perfectly.

Tradee: Yes? A message for me? Thank you kindly. Good eveling and good night. *Tradee opens the handwritten note obviously meant for his brother, and smiles to himself. It is a note full of unspoken promises and fantasies. A note meant for a lover. Luckily, the woman at the front desk had scribbled the room number in the bottom corner of the envelope. Tradee made a quick stop in the men’s restroom on the main floor. When he reappeared, his turban was gone. His locks cascaded softly around his waist. He is still carrying the bouquet of flowers that he picked for Toya.*


Mi get confuse know,
Delmar.rasta ,.Tran..what is his name.............. he is married to who it is not Mel ?
His he pretendoing to be married to Mya ?

tradee is gonna go to the room pretending to be him.this is gonna get hot....
Iam going on lunch break. devil.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-29 12:34:00
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QUOTE (jawi876 @ Oct 29 2007, 12:24 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE (phatmadame81 @ Oct 29 2007, 01:20 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I am gonna play deveils advocate hear (don't bite off my head ) laughing.gif ....................... You all ever thing Toya might come out and be the good guy.you know find out she is pregnant ..keep the baby ..get married to Tradee( I say Tradee b/c everything is going wromg for him now and she seems like the bad girl so the bad girl and no good get together and make music)
remeber I am just playing devils advocate....stirring up controversy in here....... jest.gif tongue.gif


I'm confused, and I'm the author. LOL laughing.gif helpsmilie.gif


Sorry screwed up the names.........
what I meant to say was........
Maybe Mya (yes that is the right one) might come out to be the good girl.......find out she is preggers and keep the baby (yeah I know she was saying it was no good for her career and what not but things change) She could hook up with Tradee and they fall in love ....for real get married and he get to go to farrin wishful thinking .........
srry if I confused you'll
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-29 12:30:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
QUOTE (jawi876 @ Oct 29 2007, 12:19 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
*Toya remembers that she has left Fitz in the lobby, and runs down to check on him. He is immediately concerned when he notices her ruined make-up and puffy eyes.*

Toya: I’m so sorry baby. I got caught up talking to Mya about our wedding plans. No, I’m fine sweetie. You know how emotional women can get when they start talking about weddings and love. Look, I’m still not packed yet. I’m going to pay for you to stay with me here tonight if that’s okay? Oh. I’m sorry. I forgot about little Fitz Jr. Okay, let me grab a few things, and we can come back later to get the rest.

Fitz: It’s okay, as long as you are fine. I can’t stay puttus, I have to pick up Jr. from my granny’s. He is probably wondering where I am now. If you want to stay, I can pick you up tomorrow. Alright. Hurry back okay. I love you.

Toya: I love you too. *Toya kisses Fitz passionately, and heads back to her room to grab an overnight bag. Fitz heads over to the gift shop to browse around.*

*Tradee walks into the lobby just in time to see Toya kissing the yoga guy from this morning. They are kissing as passionately as she kissed him last night. Will he ever learn that he can’t trust women? Why was he never enough? Did she just tell him that she loved him? Too? So, they were exchanging vows of love already? Tradee was fuming on the inside. He would get his vengeance on his brother, Melodee and now Toya. Yoga bwoy should consider himself a dead man.*


you caan stop there
how is he gonna get teh revenge
dyum
Tradee catch Toya A Fitz....serves him right anyways Toya was never his in the first place.....typical man fi belive sey di woman a fi him own .
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-29 12:24:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
I am gonna play deveils advocate hear (don't bite off my head ) laughing.gif ....................... You all ever thing Toya might come out and be the good guy.you know find out she is pregnant ..keep the baby ..get married to Tradee( I say Tradee b/c everything is going wromg for him now and she seems like the bad girl so the bad girl and no good get together and make music)
remeber I am just playing devils advocate....stirring up controversy in here....... jest.gif tongue.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-29 12:20:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
lawd god.............laughing.gif

Delmar............you sure seh Mel just left ina hurry????????????????
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-29 11:57:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
QUOTE (kimmykashi @ Oct 29 2007, 11:25 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
aWWWW..DAMN !! mad.gif

But, wait did she say she waan get married Sunday ?!


Yes mam, she wants to get married on sunday.......... whistling.gif whistling.gif
I don't like how Mya was making Toya feel guilty
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Did you tell Tradee before you slept with him last night? T how could you sleep with anyone not knowing your status? I think that was very irresponsible on your part. What if you infected Fitz? How will you live with yourself?
It made her sound a little selfish.....I understand she was a little taken back and scared but still ..............let me shut up before I put my foot in my mouth whistling.gif innocent.gif
Wonder what is in store for Tradee when he finds out that Mya is marrying another man..................
Melodee??????????what she doing did Tran go home to her yet
Toya you a breed................ laughing.gif laughing.gif laughing.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-29 11:48:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
bloodc###& Jawi you are a character............devil.gif rolleyes.gif I am jealous. you are a authorist /a therapist what else star_smile.gif

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QUOTE (jawi876 @ Oct 26 2007, 12:59 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Trust me! This is very hard to accomplish in real life. You have to find a way to make the man calm down and let you take "control." Most men are used to using a lot of muscles during sexual intercourse, they are not patient enough to let themselves feel a woman truly "sex" him from the inside. If you have never taken the "reigns", you should break him in slowly by using foreplay and forbidding him from touching you at all. He has to lay completely still and let you create sensations in him without reaching out for you. You don't have to use restraints for this, just gently move his hands away from you while you continue what you are doing. Tell him to relax and just close his eyes and enjoy.


Oooh this is so true yes.gif All of the above..... Been there and tamed it devil.gif No longer a problem in this yaard no0pb.gif


I guess I am the inexperieneced one...I am gonna try it soooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn devil.gif whistling.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-26 17:55:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
QUOTE (Yardiewife @ Oct 26 2007, 02:08 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Glad things went ok with your procedure. Hope you start feeling better. Take all the time you need...we don't want to rush you and spoil what you want for the story. We are eager but we can be patient...well some of us whistling.gif laughing.gif


laughing.gif:lol:lol::lol:what you trying to saying Yardiwife..fi some reason mi tink a mi you a throw you words pon............laughing.gif laughing.gif

Jawi Roberts aka JaZane she right though we don't want to rush you and spoil what you want for the story. I am glad everthing went well with teh procedure...... rose.gif rose.gif rose.gif heart.gif heart.gif We are eager but we can be patient( that last installment rekindle a fire in my husband I tought had blown out-thanks my dear devil.gif whistling.gif smile.gif )

Edited by phatmadame81, 26 October 2007 - 01:31 PM.

phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-26 13:29:00
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NO..............How could Ian have done that....I feel so hurt.


I think he's lying to her about having HIV so she won't leave him mad.gif



There is no doubt in my mind that is what he is doing, the little liar.mad.gif mad.gif mad.gif mad.gif I wish/ the roof falls in and cripple that sonoffahagun laughing.gif .................Toya should really get it on
Mi really rate Toya fi dis wis Fitz....
But mi rate Fitz more ........

Jawi thinking of you girl ................when you come back (hopefully on Monday-if you feel better) I hope you are more explosive than ever..........
I just hope we dont get pages deleted like we had done to us back in the yaadie thread laughing.gif laughing.gif laughing.gif-those where the days.
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-26 12:22:00
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I don't think so, Gill........I am at the edge of my seat here, dang Fitz know how to use his tongue boy........lol.............. yes.gif kicking.gif blush.gif innocent.gif
Jawi did not leave a thing out......it was all so beautiful...........and what made it even more so is the fact that he did all this after she just finish tellign him there is a chance she might be HIV positive...........I am in LOVE with Fitz.....for some reason I thinkhe is using hre though:
1) when he and toya where talking he just had to mention how he was a single father trying to run a business
2)he is so eager to get her pregnant-granted there are some guys who knows what they want and they anythign to get it, and he could be one
I am just looking somehting to talk about I need my fix-I am like a crack fein......I need my fix...................


I didn't see anything about him wanted to get her pregnant. I thought that was Tran for Mya. Girl now you going make me go back and read again.


He said he didn't want to spill his seeds just yet and I was just reading between the lines ( I guest I read too much into it...huh) whistling.gif
We just have to wait until the Autorist returns and then we can get some more. good.gif



ahhaaaahhaa...u'll are crazy..mi print the tory from evening and mi just done finish it ..bwoy Fitz and Toya a sumpting else..mi affi go mek hubby read Fitz tecniques for under water..ahhahaa..whoaiiii..Connery woulda tink mi a go mad..hehee...but it hottt./...hotter than Mya and Tran.

Baby girl Toy I hope u no ave AIDS darn...why dutty stinking Ian did that..wicked sommamaish smile.gif

But mi agree Fitz tory too sweet...but top how dem man yah fall inlove so quick so often

Jawi baby love tek care of urself mi dear and I pray all will be well with u. Thank u so much for the story I never read books cause can't listen to the plots I skip to the end..heheh...but chile fi u tory mi no waan miss a beat...mi a tell hubby bout it today cause mi come home wid a stack of paper....(the story) and mi start explain to him..him a seh eehhnnn fi real...mi love u chile yah heard...so tek care of urself so u can come back and continue the writing OK puttus..MUCH MUCH LOVE TO YAH!!

Kimmy


My boo hung up the phone on me earlier when I was reading it to him........said it was too muhc it gonna get me in trouble. devil.gif devil.gif devil.gif devil.gif devil.gif innocent.gif innocent.gif innocent.gif whistling.gif whistling.gif whistling.gif

Toya alright............stinking Ian just a try play with har head..........

Jawi
Again please know that we are all praying for you to make a good recoverey

Well me a go turn in early tonight..........Blessings to all may the lord watch over each and every one oe you both here and a yaad
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-25 21:21:00
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QUOTE (kimmykashi @ Oct 25 2007, 09:42 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
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I don't think so, Gill........I am at the edge of my seat here, dang Fitz know how to use his tongue boy........lol.............. yes.gif kicking.gif blush.gif innocent.gif
Jawi did not leave a thing out......it was all so beautiful...........and what made it even more so is the fact that he did all this after she just finish tellign him there is a chance she might be HIV positive...........I am in LOVE with Fitz.....for some reason I thinkhe is using hre though:
1) when he and toya where talking he just had to mention how he was a single father trying to run a business
2)he is so eager to get her pregnant-granted there are some guys who knows what they want and they anythign to get it, and he could be one
I am just looking somehting to talk about I need my fix-I am like a crack fein......I need my fix...................


I didn't see anything about him wanted to get her pregnant. I thought that was Tran for Mya. Girl now you going make me go back and read again.


He said he didn't want to spill his seeds just yet and I was just reading between the lines ( I guest I read too much into it...huh) whistling.gif
We just have to wait until the Autorist returns and then we can get some more. good.gif



ahhaaaahhaa...u'll are crazy..mi print the tory from evening and mi just done finish it ..bwoy Fitz and Toya a sumpting else..mi affi go mek hubby read Fitz tecniques for under water..ahhahaa..whoaiiii..Connery woulda tink mi a go mad..hehee...but it hottt./...hotter than Mya and Tran.

Baby girl Toy I hope u no ave AIDS darn...why dutty stinking Ian did that..wicked sommamaish smile.gif

But mi agree Fitz tory too sweet...but top how dem man yah fall inlove so quick so often

Jawi baby love tek care of urself mi dear and I pray all will be well with u. Thank u so much for the story I never read books cause can't listen to the plots I skip to the end..heheh...but chile fi u tory mi no waan miss a beat...mi a tell hubby bout it today cause mi come home wid a stack of paper....(the story) and mi start explain to him..him a seh eehhnnn fi real...mi love u chile yah heard...so tek care of urself so u can come back and continue the writing OK puttus..MUCH MUCH LOVE TO YAH!!

Kimmy


My husband hung up the phone on me earlier when I was reading it to him........said it was too muhc it gonna get me in trouble. devil.gif devil.gif devil.gif devil.gif devil.gif innocent.gif innocent.gif innocent.gif whistling.gif whistling.gif whistling.gif

Toya alright............stinking Ian just a try play with har head..........

Jawi
Again please know that we are all praying for you to make a good recoverey
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-25 21:09:00
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QUOTE (nyseness @ Oct 25 2007, 07:47 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE (phatmadame81 @ Oct 25 2007, 06:40 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I don't think so, Gill........I am at the edge of my seat here, dang Fitz know how to use his tongue boy........lol.............. yes.gif kicking.gif blush.gif innocent.gif
Jawi did not leave a thing out......it was all so beautiful...........and what made it even more so is the fact that he did all this after she just finish tellign him there is a chance she might be HIV positive...........I am in LOVE with Fitz.....for some reason I thinkhe is using hre though:
1) when he and toya where talking he just had to mention how he was a single father trying to run a business
2)he is so eager to get her pregnant-granted there are some guys who knows what they want and they anythign to get it, and he could be one
I am just looking somehting to talk about I need my fix-I am like a crack fein......I need my fix...................


I didn't see anything about him wanted to get her pregnant. I thought that was Tran for Mya. Girl now you going make me go back and read again.


He said he didn't want to spill his seeds just yet and I was just reading between the lines ( I guest I read too much into it...huh) whistling.gif
We just have to wait until the Autorist returns and then we can get some more. good.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-25 19:27:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
I don't think so, Gill........I am at the edge of my seat here, dang Fitz know how to use his tongue boy........lol.............. yes.gif kicking.gif blush.gif innocent.gif
Jawi did not leave a thing out......it was all so beautiful...........and what made it even more so is the fact that he did all this after she just finish tellign him there is a chance she might be HIV positive...........I am in LOVE with Fitz.....for some reason I thinkhe is using hre though:
1) when he and toya where talking he just had to mention how he was a single father trying to run a business
2)he is so eager to get her pregnant-granted there are some guys who knows what they want and they anythign to get it, and he could be one
I am just looking somehting to talk about I need my fix-I am like a crack fein......I need my fix...................
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-25 18:40:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
no mi tek it back, mi just finish the last installment and if mi afi come fine weh you live and use me left hand and fix you neck mi self IT A GO GET DONE..............MI WWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
NNNNN MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
RRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. .......lol
Lawd how you a go do dat to weh ............a cruelty dat mon. I can't wait.
Go take care of your self and may god be with you.
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-25 18:10:00
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QUOTE (jawi876 @ Oct 25 2007, 05:02 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I tell you, the replies and comments are more entertaining than the story. I almost can't type the rest because I'm laughing so hard at you all. I will be posting one more installment today. Unfortunately, there will be no more installments on tomorrow because I have to have the procedure done on my neck. I'm sure that I won't be able to write much because of the meds. I will try to get back to the story as soon as possible. I hope that you guys can bear with me, and not loose interest while I'm gone. biggrin.gif



Sorry to hear about it........................but you haave to take care of you though....................you are in my prayes. Don't worry I won't loose interest.
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-25 18:01:00
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QUOTE (jawi876 @ Oct 25 2007, 04:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
*Fitz was stunned. He didn’t expect her news would be this earth shattering. He had the overwhelming need to protect and support her. He knew words would fail him at this moment. So, he did what came instinctively. Fitz reached up, and pulled Toya down to him. He kissed her with all the fervor and unspoken love that he had for her. He knew that he would be there for her no matter what, even through HIV.*

Fitz: So do you know your status for sure? Did you get tested? What can I do for you? You didn’t have to share this with me Toya. Thank you for giving me the truth.

Toya: I’m not sure yet. I took the test right before coming here, but the results are still pending. I have tried to ignore it in hopes that it would go away. But, I couldn’t do the same thing to you that Ian did to me. I would have never been able to live with myself. Well, I thank you for a wonderful outing Fitz. You have created some of my most treasured moments in Jamaica, and I cherish them. *Toya stands up, and begins packing things away sure that he will be grateful to part her company as soon as possible.*

Fitz: Wait Toya. Let me respond to your news zeen? I won’t pretend that your news did not shock me. But ultimately it doesn’t change how I feel about you. Toya, I fell in love with you from our first kiss. I knew that you were my destiny. I hope you don’t think I’m crazy, but, I don’t want you to leave Jamaica. You are a freelance photographer, and you could do your work here. I want to marry you. I know that I’m not at risk with you. I know how HIV is contracted, and there are ways for us to protect ourselves. I know that I cannot let fear keep me from experiencing your love. I could react in fear, and send you away hurt and dejected. What happens though if you are not HIV-positive? I can’t loose you.

Toya: I’m confused and scared Fitz. Can you just hold me until I stop shivering?

*Fitz opens his arms, and waits until she has safely nuzzled against him. Then, he closes his arms and vows to never let her leave them again. They both fall asleep almost instantly.*



awwwwwwww Fitz. I just knew that there was somethign about you.................but it too good to be true............
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-25 17:59:00
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YES YES YES............................oh my god.......I can't tell the last time I read a book that had me sooooooooo........capttivated.

laughing.gif laughing.gif laughing.gif laughing.gif ...I agree, Maddy!!! This ish has me HOOKED!!!!! I want to join dem for breakfast, lunch, dinner and midnight snack!!! laughing.gif

Gill


laughing.gif and every little bite dem tek in between too:lol: laughing.gif laughing.gif laughing.gif
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-25 15:16:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
QUOTE (Deyoungting @ Oct 25 2007, 04:09 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Dyam POOR TOYA!!! DAT DYAM IAN IS A PISSA #######!!!!! I think it's lie him a tell her fi control har suh!!! Some men will stop at nothing...How Fitz aguh tek dis pissa news!

Gill

him seem more in love with har dan anything else, so he just might stick around, and i too think Ian is using this HIV think to contol Toya. and Fitz just might see that *crossing my fingers in hopes that he can see that *
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-25 15:15:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
NO..............How could Ian have done that....I feel so hurt.
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-25 15:12:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
I love Fritz, he is sucha gentle man.
whats up with Mya..she nuh breed yettttttttttt
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-25 15:04:00
Mexico, Latin & South AmericaMy name ain't Stella....
YES YES YES............................oh my god.......I can't tell the last time I read a book that had me sooooooooo........capttivated.
phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-25 15:00:00
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Tradee: Greetings in de name of His Imperial Majesty Haile Selassie I, King of King, Lord of Lords, Conquering Lion of the tribe of Judah, Elect of Jah, Mighty Negus, Ruler of Creation JAH RASTAFARI…Selassie I!

if that ain't the longest rasta greeting ever...lawd laughing.gif

Fi real...I was sayin deh same ting...jus wuh yuh waan from mi?? Come bang pon my door bright and hearly inna deh mawning fi tell mi DAT!!! laughing.gif
Gill

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I am shaking with anxiousness (is there such a bloody word )
what is gonna happen,...............lawd god

I KNOW...I think EVIL TRADEE is Baaaaaack!! girlwerewolf2xn.gif Dyam Psycho!!
Gill


He wanna give her the wood!

But she doan seh him wood nuh GOOD!! laughing.gif laughing.gif



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phatmadame81FemaleJamaica2007-10-25 13:34:00